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Bad Writing

Posted by staff on October 16, 2009

468px-Edward_George_Earle_Lytton_Bulwer_Lytton,_1st_Baron_Lytton_by_Henry_William_PickersgillSince 1982 the English Department at San Jose State University has sponsored the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest,named for the british novelist Edward George Earle Lytton Bulwer-Lytton. Bulwer-Lytton is known for the famous phrase “It was a dark and stormy night.”  A whimsical literary competition the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest challenges entrants to compose the opening sentence to the worst of all possible novels.

Here are some sentences from our creative writing class.

As I questioned the random nameless pursuer I had caught he exclaimed that he works for a powerful secret agency with spies everywhere, like my bodyguard who then used the element of surprise to shoot this completely superfluous other guy in the room. ———————————————D


Love was in the air that one beautiful day in my grade school, so many years ago it seems now when my first encounter with the opposite sex took place, I’ll never forget that magical lunch break we spent together locked in the locker room. —————————————————————————————————————————-J

The door slowly creaked open and the door hinges clearly needed oil but never mind that because there in the doorway stood a black human figure that stylishly made its way towards the side of the bed, the left side, not the right, and raised the blade in the air and brought it down onto the left lung, not the right, of the person in the bed and so the mystery murderer made his swift escape leaving the person in the bed dying of an injury with the only sound that could be heard of the lung with a hole in it which sounded like a nearly empty ketchup bottle that you try getting the ketchup out of but it just makes that wheezy funny but gross noise. ———————————-J

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A Whole New World – Chapter Two Part Two

Posted by staff on February 11, 2009

You Alone Can Break My Fall 

Zeth ran out of his apartment and down the street as fast as he possibly could. He ran infront of cars as he crossed the road infront of the library and thought to himself ’she can’t lose you too… be careful’. 

As Zeth came up to the house he caught his breath. He dug in his pocket for his keys while thinking to himself ‘it’s not true…she’s jsut sleeping…’ It took Zeth three tries to get the key into the hole. When he opened the door it flew open and he raced up the stairs. 

‘Bells!’ Zeth hollered as he ran up the stairs and dashed into Bella’s room. He gazed at Bella curled up on her bed clinging to a stuffed bear she’d had since she was born. Her face was red and her makeup was smeared. He could tell she was still sobbing. 

Zeth walked into her room and pulled her up into a hug. They sat there in silence for moments until finally Zeth spoke. 

‘Bells…where’s mom…’ he spoke silently. 

‘Room…’ Bella said. She was tired from crying, Zeth could hear it in her voice. 

Zeth lay Bella down on her pillow and walked over to his mom’s bedroom. The door was still open and he could see his mom laying on the bed. Zeth’s heart dropped to his toes. This couldn’t be happening…he just moved out. Bella thought she’d lost him and now she had to lose her mother?! He wanted freedom from his mom but he didn’t wanna lose her…this wasn’t what he wanted. He couldn’t take this… 

Zeth walked over to his mom and touched her face. IT was cold…Her lips were turning blue and her skin was unnaturally pale. Zeth let a few tears roll down his cheek as he kissed her on the forehead and walked back over to see Bella. 

‘Bells…’ Zeth began as he approached her bed, ‘I’m gonna call 9-1-1. We’re gonna go to my house for the night okay? Pack some stuff. You can’t stay here alone. I’ll call the school and everything…don’t you worry just…jsut pack some stuff.’ Bella nodded as she slowly rose from her bed and sat up. Her head stayed down. It was a total mess but it didn’t really matter. Zeth gave her a kiss on the cheek. ‘I love you kiddo.’ He smiled. 

Zeth took the phone downstairs and dialed 9-1-1. courage

Zeth looked around him. He’s only left here three days ago…three days ago everything was fine. He couldn’t remember his mother acting weird except that she was tired. She kept taking little afternoon naps but they didn’t think that was anything serious… 

Zeth sat over on the couch and laid back waiting for the ambulance to come. He lay his head back on the pillow and sobbed silently so Bella wouldn’t hear him. She couldn’t see him break…she neeeded him to be strong…

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A WHOLE NEW WORLD -Chapter Two

Posted by staff on January 15, 2009

 

Chapter Two (Part One): 
I’m Strong For You

‘Mum!?’ Bella shouted as she waltzed into the kitchen and looked around her. The car was in the driveway so her mother should be home.

‘Mum?’ Bella shouted again as she walked out of the kitchen. She didn’t smell diner and she didn’t even see any breakfast. Her mom always left a little later then her. Usually when Bella was leaving her mom was going to get breakfast. This morning, though, her mom was still in the shower when she left. Her alarm didn’t go off and Bella woke her up. Unfortunatly, her mom was probably still late for work.

Bella slowly walked up the stairs. She was tired from a long day. Her legs hurt from the weights in wieght room and her arms ached from benching. Bella sighed in relief when she reached the top of the stiars. She took another deep breath to shout again.

‘Mum!?’ Bella yelled as she straightened herself up. Still no answer. Bella looked in the bathroom first. The light was still on and the towel still on the floor. Bella just shrugged and turned it off. Maybe her mom forgot to turn it off this morning. She walked over to her bedroom to see if her mom was on the computer. Nope. She wasn’t there either. The only other place she could be would be in her own bedroom.

Bella walked over to her mom’s bedroom and her door was opened only slightly. Bella opened it slowly and quietly. Her mom was probably just taking a nap. She’d been so exhausted lately. Neither of them knew why, she just was. Bella thought maybe her mom was coming down with a cold but her mom blamed it on old age. Zeth even said that may jsut be it.

Her mom was laying on the bed. It looked like she’d fallen asleep sitting up and just fallen over. Bella smiled as she walked over to her mom. When she looked at her, her hair was still matted, as if she hadn’t done a thing to it, not even brushed it. Her makeup wasn’t done and she didn’t look too put-together.

‘Mum…’ Bella said in a normal voice while shaking her mom’s shoulder slightly. ‘Mum…’ Bella said again a little louder. ‘Mom?’ Bella said in a scared voice now. Her mom should have woken. She kneeled down and looked at her mom. Her chest wasn’t moving up and down and she wasn’t even snoring. That’s when it hit her, and it hit her hard too. Her stomach dropped and her mind went blank. A few tears rolled down her cheek and her hands began to shake.

‘Mom!’ Bella shouted in agony. ‘Mom!!!’

Bella rushed out of the room and grabbed the phone. Quickly she dialed Zeth’s number as tears rolled down her cheeks. Her hands shook rapidly and she could feel her face getting hot.

‘Hey Bells what’s up?’ Zeth said in a cheery voice.iconator_a7fc19c6685c6e24a52e51bcb93b6b8e-1

‘Zeth!’ Bella screamed, ‘Zeth…Mom…she..and I…and..’ Bella couldn’t make a full sentence come out of her mouth. She couldn’t even THINK a full sentence in her mind.

‘Bells, honey, slow down. What’s wrong, talk to me.’ Zeth’s voice was concerned now. His sister didn’t freak out like this and not for just anything either.

‘Mom! She’s…not…not…moving…and I tried…and…Zeth I need you…’ Bella said between sobs.

‘Oh…Bells I’ll be right there! I love you’! Zeth hollered as he hung up the phone. Bella just dropped the phone and dropped to her knees letting long hard sobs come from deep within her chest.

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A Whole New World – Part 2

Posted by staff on December 14, 2008

Chapter One (part two) : 
A Whole New World 

silhouettesargue72‘Oh. Off to see that…’friend’. I understand.’ Zeth winked and Bella nudged his arm which made them both laugh.

‘Micheal’s nothing more than a friend…’

‘Oh, but his beautiful blue eyes just send you through the roof and you know it Bells.’ Zeth said in a sarcastic voice and nudged Bella’s arm playfully again.

‘Shut up Z!’ Bella excalimed as she began to walk away. She didn’t get very far before he streached out his arm and pulled her back.

‘Hey, I”m sorry…I just needed to tell you, I’m goin back to my apartment for the night but tell mom I’ll be there in the morning. I gotta unpack some more.’

‘I wish you didn’t move…’ Bella began as she started to walk towards the park with Zeth following along behind her.

‘I know Bells, but it’s my last semester of highschool. I wanna have a place of my own. C’mon. In three years you’ll understand.’

Bella was fifteen but she understood all too well what her brother was saying. But it didn’t mean she didn’t still think of him as her big-strong-protector.

‘C’mon Bells. Here, lemme make you a deal,’ Zeth said stopping them in front of Domino’s pizza. The smell of pizza was overwhelming. Every day when Bella walked by she breathed in a long hard breath of the delicious pizza. 

‘Fine…shoot…’ Bella wasn’t very impressed with her brother right now. Actually, he was getting rather aggravting. 

‘Awh, c’mon. Listen, come to my apartment tonight. We’ll order pizza, maybe invite Damien over? Waddaya say?’ Bella looked thoughtfully into his eyes. She stared for a few moments thinking about him. The things they’d done…the things she’d lose. She really missed the guy. 

‘Alright…casual right?’ Bella smirked slightly, tilting her head to the right still locking her eyes with his. Eye-contact, it’s what she was taught. 

‘Yep! I love you Bells, see you at six!’ 

Zeth gave her a kiss on the cheek and flashed a smile as he ran down the street and around the corner. Bella stared after him. She wanted her brother to move back home. She wanted to stay up late and talk all night with him…she wanted him back. She didn’t like this new world. She didn’t like it at all.

Bella sighed and continued to walk down the street thinking thoughtfully and silently to herself, choking in tears of rage and sadness. It wasn’t fair…not in the least. He couldn’t just live at home? Who cared if it was his last year. He had a family, he didn’t need to be on his own. She loved her brother to pieces. He was always there for her when she needed him most but sometimes she just wished he would realize how much she really did love him. Maybe, just maybe, then he wouldn’t leave her on her own like this. 

Bella rounded the corner and approached the park with her music on full blast. She slid off her earphones and listened around. She listened to her feet crunch on the snow and smelled the crisp winter air. The scent of autumn was still about, but it was fading ever so slowly. 

She made her way over to the swings where she’d spend most of her time . But it got boring all too quickly in the anicipation to be with her brother. She left early, walking at the fastest pace she could without calling it a run. 

Bella walked into the house jsut as the snow picked up and shook off her boots. She looked at the rats-nest which she’d like to call her hair and walked into the mess she’d like to call a living room. Time to tell mum what was going on tonight but she really won’t mind at all. Bella made her way to the kitchen on her search for her mum.

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Listen To The Silence

Posted by staff on November 19, 2008

Listen To The Silence            Listen To The Silence will be posted little by little so bear with me as I attempt to make this story as enjoyable and interesting as I possibly can. It might start off slow but I promise you it will get interesting. Enjoy. 

Zeth had recently moved out leaving his sister Bella and his mom on their own. That is, until Bella calls with some frightening news that would forever change their lives. This is a story of romance, tragedy but most of all courage to face the circumstances you may never be able to control. 

Chapter One (part one) : 
A Whole New World
 

She pushed her way through the crowd attempting to get out as fast as she could. Bella hated being stuck in the middle of this huge crowd of stuck-up-snobs. Bella’s long brown hair flew in all directions when she reached the freedom of the outdoors. She leaned over onto the wall and relaxed a little. She let out a deep sigh, letting her bangs fall into her face. In one soft and swift motion she brushed them away and looked around.                                                                                                                                        

Crowds of people surrounded her. They talked and jumped and whirled around her. She was never noticed. Not truly. With one last sigh Bella pulled herself up off the way and turned in the direction of the town park. It would take her about fifteen minutes to get there, enough time to listen to three songs and read twenty pages in her book. Perfect.                                                                                                                            

Music was how she expressed herself. She danced it out in her routines, her teachers were astounded at the things she could come up with on her own. She wanted to work on a new routine soon and her mom always told her what she needed work on. Her mom was like her personal trainer, she’s who got Bella into dance.    She ran across the street in front of a few cars. One thing she learned about living in Amherstburg is that you always had to run out in front of cars if you had any hope of getting across the street at this time of day. Sure, they honked and made a fuss but who cared?                                                                          

Bella opened her book and began to read as she listened to Tongue Tied by Faber Drive. A favorite of hers. She had really gotten into the book and was startled when someone tapped her on the shoulder. Bella screamed.

‘Shh!! Damn it Bella you scare to easily. And you’re gonna go deaf.’ Bella’s big brother Zeth stared at her. He pulled out both of her earphones and slung them around her neck.

‘I can do that on my own Z…’ Bella trailed off trying to make herself sound capable. He was only looking outpretty-face1 for her. Bella looked up into Zeth’s eyes. She couldn’t help but be jealous of his perfect green eyes that glimmered no matter what lighting they were in. Her eyes were just boring brown and looked like chocolate. Sometimes you couldn’t even see her pupils. His hair was brown, just like hers, but he got his streaked with beautiful blonde highlights and lowlights making it look even better than her naturally dirty blonde hair.

‘Home’s that way, you know that right?’ Zeth joked pointing in the general direction of home.

‘I know…I’m just goin’ for a walk.’ Sometimes Zeth let the fact that he was eighteen go to his head and he thought he could boss her around. She knew he meant well though. 

 

-J.Perron

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Qualities

Posted by staff on November 7, 2008

The Book of Qualities  by J. Ruth Gendler - presents 74 qualities–including Pleasure, Anger, Terror, Beauty, and Change as everyday characters who live among us. Both personal and impersonal, the Qualities convey a variety of human emotions in a simple and entertaining manner; readers are inspired to reflect on their own qualities and communicate their feelings with new clarity. Here are some qualities as interpreted by the Amherst Writer’s Craft class.

    HOPE                                                                                                                                              

    Hope tries her hardest at everything she does. She can try to mask her emotions, but nothing can hide the glint of anticipation in those expressive eyes when she’s waiting for something to happen. Hope’s best friend is Joy, but she turns away  from Disappointment. If the two must meet, though, she holds her head high and puts  on a smile. She wouldn’t be Hope if she did anything else!

            Hope’s favourite season is Spring, when the skies turn from grey to blue, and  the clouds change from the colour of smoke to the pure white shade of snow. She loves to hear the birds start to sing and to see the leaves and buds grow on the trees. She delights in the smell of cherry blossoms.

                      Spring may be her favourite, but she’s always there on the cold, gusty nights when the snowdrifts swell to waist height, and you can’t see out your front window. She’ll take your hand, rest her head on your shoulder, and remind you that the nice weather will come again.

                                                               —–CAITLYN

Patience

         Patience is quiet and calm.  She does not complain about anything, not even pain.  Some people say she is a virtue, and deserves to be handled with care.  There are no short cuts on her walk home, for she always takes the longest route possible.  Patience enjoys sitting under the big, old maple tree in her small back yard, watching the painted leaves fall as autumn introduces itself.  Every morning and night, she observes the magnificent, golden sun slowly rise and set.  Her garden is full of brightly coloured, dilatory flowers.  She takes great care in making certain that the grass grows perfectly, with not a blade out of place.

      It is often difficult for Patience to make friends, since she tends to be neglected by her peers.  In school and at home she has become a topic of much debate.  People cannot decide whether to embrace or ignore her.  My mother says she is important, though I cannot understand why.  She teaches and lives with her mentally challenged younger sister.  Most people call her sister a bother, but she takes the time to give her sibling the attention she requires and deserves.  She has a kind, gentle heart.

      Rather than using e-mail and instant messaging, Patience writes extensive letters to her family members that live far away.  She hardly ever gets a letter back, but she continues to send them.  She loves reading long, drawn out novels, historical documents, and books that are so large they barely fit in her slender hands.  She reads them all hours of the night.  Patience never eats at fast food restaurants, where the meal is practically ready before it is ordered.  She prefers extravagant, fancy restaurants that take hours to cook the meal to perfection.  As I grow older and wiser, along with my colleagues, we will discover for ourselves that Patience is very important to have around.

                                                                             —– JULIA

FEAR

            Fear is pale.  She sweats profusely and trembles every second.  Her eyes are dark, and always wide open.  Above are her brows, drawn together, and her mouth forms a straight line.  She constantly breathes quickly so that her chest moves rapidly.  When she walks into the room there are high-pitched screams.  Some gasp, and others cry.  When she attempts to make conversation you become speechless and when you open your mouth, all you seem to do it stutter.  You shouldn’t let her get too close though.  She smells horrible. It’s like thick smoke, and it’s also rotten and musty.  Try not to run, because she’ll grab you in a second. Her hands are sweaty and the rest of her body is clammy.  She has been known to cause pain to others, which is why people are so scared.  She is tense, but also very shaky. Her skin is slimy, but also very picky in spots.  Everything around her just feels damp.  The taste just might be the worst.  It is bitter, sour and acidic.  She leaves your mouth so dry that it feels like there are hundreds of needles moving inside. It is very unpleasant.  

         People usually try to avoid her, and some deny that she is even there.  You must have great courage to be able to face her head on.  Not many people can say that they can do that.  There are even some who live in terror, for they know the worst can happen.  When people are home alone, there is a spider, they are separated, there are strangers or when they are losing control- there fear is.  There are so many causes for her to just show up.  The most common is pain, or threat of pain.  She is around so much people concentrate on the worst.  The secret to getting rid of her is identifying why she is there, and not denial.  Face her head on if you can, and she just might go away.  But remember to take small steps, motivate yourself, think positive and recognize reality.  With this advice she is sure to never bother you again. 

                                                              ——- Rachelle

 

 

 

LOVE

       Love is beautiful. Her golden hair flows around her and her sapphire eyes only speak the truth. She sings melodious songs that light up a dark sky. Her voice carries throughout the Heavens and can be heard by everyone. Her perfume smells of roses and her eyes are enchanting. Love is patient. She doesn’t tap her foot when waiting for you by the front door. Her wide smile greets you when you enter.

       Many people mistake Lust for Love. But when you get a close up look at them you can surly tell them apart. For Love always carries a crimson handbag and Lust is never without someone else.

        Someone once told me that Love was never born. That she was only a fantasy fairytale. But when I met her for myself, her hug filled me with warmth and her voice filled me with song. And she was my best friend and she will never fade from my heart.

                                          —--REBECCA

DEPRESSION

Depression is desperate, cold and alone. He sees everything in monochrome – blacks and grays. But no white. He does not like much and that which he does is moldy, damp and rough. He sits around at night with his pet, Oscar the Ostracized turtle.

Everyone who has met depression ends up shunning him. They believe Depression only likes to talk about sad things, like funerals and empty peanut butter jars. He is frail, has a hoarse voice, and is completely lifeless. What they do not realize is that Depression offers another perspective and insight about life. He shows others the dimmer, fainter parts.

But, even though I understand Depression, I still deal with it like I do a headache – I go to sleep.

                                                                                                              —— Shivan

Skepticism

Skepticism likes to keep his distance. He stalks around the edges of a crowd and then slips quietly into it. He reasons with you and turns you against ideas with ease. Skepticism has cold hands and even colder feet.

Skepticism lives alone in a simple, barren apartment. No pictures disguise the walls. Skepticism stays up late, watching the minutes tick by on the clock. He hates infomercials and used car salesmen. Skepticism sleeps on a hard, single bed.

You will most often find skepticism eavesdropping on a conversation. He sits off to the side and drums his fingers on the table, his nails clicking on the hard surface. Skepticism raises one eyebrow and arranges a sneer on his face. Like an overbearing parent he protects, but then smothers. I have learned to listen to Skepticism with caution.

                      —–DORA

 

 

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